Chapter 22 Of Lay Me Low

[teddy_radiator]

...is up on Ashwinder - surprise! You can find it HERE.

Comments

[howlingmojo.livejournal.com]

You are awesome. Busy bee!

[justpinkpastel.livejournal.com]

Ok. I read it and am ready for the next one!

Not to sound like a greedy child, but ... Gimme! Gimme! Gimme!!!

[stgulik.livejournal.com]

Careful what you wish for, 'pastel. Chapter 23 made my heart fall out of my chest. Messy!

[teddyradiator.livejournal.com]

You will be happy to know that Chapter 22 was uploaded with no cavities.... I think I've only ever had one other chapter with no corrections before... :)

[stgulik.livejournal.com]

W00t! I respect Ashwinder - its SPaG standards aren't arbitrary like GE's.

[teddyradiator.livejournal.com]

The funny thing is that I posted my pristine, Ashwinder-corrected chapters of Spellbreaker and As Morning Falls to TPP, and they came back loaded with corrections! The corrected Ashwinders corrections. That's why I don't normally post to TPP - I'm just not up to their standards, and it takes ages to post through the queue.

In Ashwinder, they will go ahead and post the chapter, then leave you a note telling you the corrections they 'suggest' you make (they're very tactful about it, saying it will make your story better), but it's already there to be read. At TPP, they won't post until you make all the changes, which usually takes about two weeks if you're lucky.

Both have what are called 'validated authors' whom they post immediately, but you have to show that you don't make mistakes (I think they allow 3 per chapter), so the chances of me becoming a validated author on Ash are slim, and on TPP they are Nil.

[stormymaries.livejournal.com]

*FLAILS* I just read chapter 23! OH GAWD WHY IS THERE NO NEXT BUTTON!! The twist....bloody brilliant! I -need- know what's next! You have made such an addict out of me!

[teddyradiator.livejournal.com]

No one was more shocked that I when I woke this morning to a mountain of reviews, all freaked out! I'm a little freaked myself!