Okay, What Do You Think of This one?

I've got to tweak it a good bit, but what do you think?

That is the Sound of My Head Banging on the Desk

Tomorrow I officially find out if my old laptop's hard drive can be accessed. Brian thinks it can. I am hopeful; if I have to start Chapter 20 over I might hang myself.

I have talked my beta into looking over 'I Want That One' for posting on Ashwinder. I'm sure it will be shot down in flames for it's noncon and dubcon overtones, but I have tried to explain it the best way possible. And as we've all learned from last week's marshmallow roast on Lay Me Low, there are people who will go ahead a read a story just to barbeque the writer.

No one but my beta should read it under duress. Just hit the back button, I say. I wrote it and it's not pretty in parts, but I do explain why. Oh, crap, why am I still trying to justify it? Because it's one of my children, and even though its a problem child, it's my child and I want it to be liked and not picked on and bullied just because its mother has sent it out into the world with a bad haircut and a smock top.

I've got a frozen shoulder - I'm on pain medication. This might not make sense. I think I'll go and take a nap.

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Forclose_contrast . My first dialogue fic, Spelled To Life.