There's only one real critique I have of the site and it's that you're giving away too much of the plot in your synopsis. If this is a reader focused site (as opposed to publisher/agent) there's just too much information in the summary, some of which seems like should be left to the reader to discover on their own. Like the doctor being a good guy. I feel that should be a reveal for the reader. The focus of the story might be the D/s relationship but I feel it would be better to keep the little surprises a surprise and make the synopsis a bit more teasing. You don't want to give away the store before you get paid.
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Date: 2017-06-30 02:50 pm (UTC)I hope that makes sense.