Sorry to bother you, but I just wanted to let you know that I have posted the Epilogue for I Want That One on Ashwinder. This has been heavily expanded from the small Epilogue of the original story, almost to the point where I thought i was going to have to break it into two chapters. I would very much like your opinion on it, especially if you read the first one - I'd love your take on comparing the two.
You can find it
HERE. Thanks so much for sticking with it - I only had one person get offended by it! Result!